I woke up, sitting in a chair. Looking around me, I saw
more chairs, filled with people. There were thousands of chairs and thousands
of people. They all had this politely curious air about them; looking around,
wondering why they were there. Just like me. I looked ahead of me and saw a
massive Building, so tall that I couldn't see the top. I flexed my muscled to
stand, to get to the building, but quickly realized I was unable to.
Looking to my
right, I saw an old man kneeling. He looked a bit like a priest, wearing long
black robes and holding a leather-bound book. Taking one look at it, however, I
somehow knew immediately that it wasn’t a Bible.
The man slowly
got to his feet. The thousands of gathered people drew their attention to him,
all waiting. Waiting for what, I did not know.
The priest-like
man opened his book. From it, he began to read. He spoke with power and
conviction, though it was in a language that I didn’t recognize. Looking around
me, however, I saw that no one else seemed confused; to the contrary many
seemed very interested in what he had to say, nodding their heads and looking
on him with approving eyes. What is going
on? I wondered.
As the man spoke,
his words seemed to grow in volume and power, and there was one thought that
raced through my mind: I have to get out
of here.
After a
very long and drawn-out word from the speaker, everyone’s attention suddenly
turned to an item in front of me that I had somehow not noticed before. I
looked at it as well; it was a long box, probably about ten feet in length.
Painted a shining black, as I gazed at it, I felt a deep sense of foreboding
settle into my gut. A coffin. At that
moment, I wanted to be far, far away.
The venerable man
spoke on, reading from that disturbing book of his. Even though I couldn’t
understand his odd language, I sensed he was making several important points.
He gestured with his hands and sometimes even stomped his feet. After what
seemed like several more minutes of the man’s powerful tirade, I felt a tremor
in the ground; my chair quavered and shook. The horrible feeling in my stomach
worsened. Before me, the coffin lid cracked and my breath caught in my throat.
I looked at the man in horror, then his voice sped up and became excited. More
of the coffin splintered. Sounds of scratching and banging soon followed.
Whatever was trapped inside wanted badly to get out.
The assembled
crowd murmured. Everyone waited, anxiously anticipating what was to come. The coffin cracked loudly a final time, and then there
was silence. Even the frightening man had stopped his reading. A shiver of
excitement ran through the crowd as a shiver of terror ran up my spine.
The silence
stretched on for what felt like an eternity. And then, just as I had begun to
wonder if whatever was inside had fallen asleep or maybe died, I saw a hand
come out and grasp the side of the coffin.
The leathery skin
was black, black as three in the morning. The palm was the size of a normal
human’s, but the fingers were each about a foot long, very thin, and ended in
needle-like points. The hand tightened on the edge of the coffin and It slowly
pulled itself out. My first assessment was that It was tall— at least nine
feet, even though It’s back was extremely hunched over. It was emaciated, but
Its head looked three times too big for Its body. Its large, bulbous eyes were
an inky black and, as It turned to gaze at me, I shuddered. I felt as if It
were peering into my soul. In that instant, I wanted to scream, but no sound
came from my throat.
With a cry of
triumph, the priest-like man started to babble in his odd language and
continued to read from the book, faster and excitedly. The people around me
started to applaud and cheer. I looked on in horror as It slowly stepped out of
the coffin and started to walk towards us in a slow, shuffling gait. The speaker’s
voice had grown to a shout and I could tell before looking at him by the quaver
in his voice that he was crying. Turning to him, I saw to my horror that his
tears were the same inky black as Its eyes. And when It was only ten feet away,
the priest-like man stopped speaking. I saw that his eyes had grown to be
entirely black. And as if in slow-motion, the man fell; dead before he even hit
the ground. It was at this moment that I realized that I was now able to move.
I broke into a full-out sprint, rushing past It. I somehow knew that if I were
to get to the Tower, I would be safe. Looking back, I saw that the thousands of
assembled people were one-by-one, all falling to the ground; dead, with
entirely black eyes. I ran faster.
When I finally
reached the Tower, I looked back only to see that It was following me at It’s
slow pace. I didn’t doubt that I could outrun It, but I definitely wasn’t about
to take the chance.
I ran to the
stairs. Some instinct told me to get to the roof. However tall this tower was,
I knew that this was the only way to get away from It. So I climbed. One hundred stairs… Two hundred stairs… I
soon lost count. I went up for what seemed like forever, but the adrenaline
inside me didn’t allow me to tire. I always seemed to have the energy for the
next flight.
As I rushed up
the many stairs, I heard faint voices coming from the walls. It sounded to me
like a slow-motion prayer. Hearing the voices calmed me for some reason. It was
me a sense of peace and safety, unlike anything I had previously felt amidst
all of this confusion.
When I finally
reached the last set of stairs, I breathed a heavy sigh of relief. I knew this
ordeal would all be over soon; I just had to reach the roof.
Reaching a
doorway, I burst through to find myself on the roof. I got a sudden feeling
nausea as I looked over the edge; I was far higher than I had ever been before.
To my shock and
surprise, I saw that I wasn’t alone on the roof; on the far end stood a little
girl, maybe six or seven years old. I saw that she was crying. I had a sudden
urge to go over and comfort her, to help her. However, I once again found
myself unable to move from where I was standing.
A sudden burst of
wind on the roof caused my eyes to sting and water; I shut them and wiped them
with my eyes. Just before I opened them, my previous feeling of sickness and
foreboding returned. I knew in an instant that the little girl and I weren’t
the only ones on the roof. I opened my eyes to see It standing a few feet away
from me. I felt bile rise in my throat as It slowly raised one of Its long
fingers to point at me. I felt a crash under my feet; the Tower began to shake.
The wind picked up again and I felt the entire Tower rock back and forth. I
realized in grower terror that the Tower was falling. I shut my eyes tight and…
I woke up, sitting in a chair.
Looking around
me, I saw more chairs. There were hundreds of people all rising to their feet.
It took a few seconds before I realized that I was in church; I must have
fallen asleep. The band is what woke me up, the loud noises of the drums
bringing me back to conciseness. Wiping the sleep and tears from my face, I
quickly stood, hoping nobody had noticed.
As I was leaving
church that day, I noticed a little girl, maybe six or seven years old, walking
out. Her pale face looked to have just woken up. She was holding her mom’s hand
and there were tears streaming down her cheeks. For some reason, she looked
extremely familiar to me, though for the life of me, I couldn’t think of where
I might’ve seen her before.
I moved towards
the girl in order to get a better look at her face. As I drew near, however, it
was as if she knew I was coming. She turned her head to face me, and that’s
when I saw her eyes. Her horrible, inky black eyes.
Then I woke up.
WOW!!! I loved the short story. I felt breathless as he ran up the stairs. I felt fear as he was being chased. To me the sign of good writing is when the writer can bring out a bevy of feelings within me. This is great writing! Looking forward to reading more.
ReplyDeleteGreat job guys. : ) Did you enter this in the contest you talked about? I hope so! Thanks for sharing this.
ReplyDeleteYes, we did enter the contest. It was a lot of fun to write! Thanks for your help Mr. Tucker!
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